The Official Writing Challenge
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If this is autobiographical, I hope you get your special retreat soon! :)
08/11/05
I think there is a story to tell here. Find someone to help with grammar and structure and keep writing.
I am from Asheville, NC real close to Weaverville! It is a great place to retreat! Work on your structure because I think you have a great story to tell!
08/12/05
A very nice slice of life :) Just a note -the tecnical things might be a bit confusing for some, but it worked. (my hubby's in construction so I followed it :)
08/12/05
Nice little piece. It works better when writing for online works to space out the paragraphs, as in one white line between them.
Sounds exhausting! Paragraphing spacing would help the reader; also careful attention to sentence structure. Hope you can enjoy a much needed break from the hard work soon.....
08/15/05
I hope you enjoy your retreat when you stop working. In the meantime try retreating into yourself with positive thoughts to help you until such time that you stop working.