The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
Yes He is! Thanks for sharing this story.
08/09/05
What an amazing example of how God meets us in our hour of need. How beautiful!
Very effective writing! I was right there in your shoes!
isn't wonderful how HE can take tears of sadness and change them into joy suddenly! this was written well.
08/11/05
Thanks for sharing.
What a great story of God's goodness! Try adding a few more details to paint the picture-(setting, more about the characters) and what a beautiful message you will have!
08/12/05
A good God and a good husband -awesome!
What a sweet testimony to God's grace. If I could suggest anything at all, I would like to have had more specifics about the person who paid the check - just some descriptions to make the scene more real. Great job with a great story.
A lovely moment - thank you. I also admired the discipline and tightness of the writing, which helped to make the point so effectively. Often when we are tired and low, all we need to do is re-connect with Our Father in Heaven, whose love and reassurance is always there and freely given. God bless.