The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/09
Awesome that you used a wonderful children's book as an illustration for a very good Biblical lesson!

A few comma errors and some minor mechanical glitches--nothing major.

Very good devotional.
06/03/09
a good story but I felt that it would fit better into a desciption of greed and not so much light and dark. Well written and clear to folow though thanks