The Official Writing Challenge
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You've given me some good food for thought! Just what kind of Christian am I?! I needed that today. You mentioned some very pertinent issues also, such as abortion and homosexuality.

Enjoyed your written thoughts!

Jude 1:3 Beloved, when I gave all diligence to write unto you of the common salvation, it was needful for me to write unto you, and exhort you that ye should earnestly contend for the faith which was once delivered unto the saints.

God bless you for your boldness to speak the truth... no compromise.

You have encouraged me in a closer walk with our crucified and risen Saviour, Jesus Christ!

Very thought-provoking!

A few of your rhymes were a little bit awkward or forced.

I really like the way you show the courage of your convictions.
good idea. I thoght some of the rhymes were a bit suspect especially the fourth lines which sometimes read awkwardly as though you had tried to think of something just to fit the second line.
better in my view to write a non rhyming poem than one that has forced ryhmes unless it is a comical poem and this clearly is not as the subject matter is so serious.
If you feel up to it try another version similar but ditch the rhymimg!
Hi Brian. I just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, Just a Little Grey, actually did very well in the Light and Dark Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 11th in that Level. There were a lot of entries this week, and competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so give yourself a pat on the back. :-)

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August. It’s going to be an amazing time of inspiration, information and encouragement.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)