The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/09
Wonderful illustration, and I like your characters.

Your tie-in with the topic of the week almost seems like an afterthought.

Good job with the rural flavor of this entertaining story.
Well done, loved this story and it is so true. A woman finds her true beauty in the love of a man. Thank you I needed to remember that.
06/03/09
I like it! I didnt like all the desriptions of colours at the begining though white patio, red rag etc. It just seemed that they were added at random! It had a good begining middle and a nice touch at the end. Thanks
06/03/09
Your title drew me in because my pastor has told that story on numerous occasions over the years...uses it at weddings as well. What a great use of the topic. I liked the reality of the story because your MC didn't have a quick fix for the guy he worked with. I loved it, though, when he got home. I promise you, he has a ten-cow wife.