The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/09
Wonderful illustration, and I like your characters.

Your tie-in with the topic of the week almost seems like an afterthought.

Good job with the rural flavor of this entertaining story.
06/02/09
Well done, loved this story and it is so true. A woman finds her true beauty in the love of a man. Thank you I needed to remember that.
06/03/09
I like it! I didnt like all the desriptions of colours at the begining though white patio, red rag etc. It just seemed that they were added at random! It had a good begining middle and a nice touch at the end. Thanks
06/03/09
Your title drew me in because my pastor has told that story on numerous occasions over the years...uses it at weddings as well. What a great use of the topic. I liked the reality of the story because your MC didn't have a quick fix for the guy he worked with. I loved it, though, when he got home. I promise you, he has a ten-cow wife.