The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/09
Suffering the loss of a loved one is most difficult. Your description is so accurate...life is foggy, lonely, and cold.

I hope you chose to walk again with God. He is our hope and strength, isn't He?! Good writing.
05/30/09
Beautifully written.

I wonder if putting God's words, toward the end, in italics might make it more clear that the voice of the poem has shifted?

You've got some excellent phrases and images here, top notch for this (or any other) level.
06/03/09
oh I love this one!! I like the whole thing perfect for me just as it is. gets my vote(not that I have one) LOL. Thanks