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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Light and Dark (05/21/09)

TITLE: Light and Dark (i)
By naomi blake
05/22/09


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Today I hang my head in shame, but tomorrow I will not change. I am scared to break the shell, afraid of who will yell. The gray inbetween I use as an excuse, I refuse to dig deeper to look in the Bible because I know in my heart that there really isn't any gray inbetween the light and the dark. Who am I you may ask? Well thats easy, I'm you! In one way or another we all make an excuse. You may chuckle and laugh and say thats not true but think about and you know, that I am right about you. It's okay though, to fall off the wagon because we all do it we're not perfect. However that doesn't mean that we should live in the dark because then we would be blind. We must strive for the light at the end of the tunnel because there we will truley see and feel that love and happiness that engulfs us. So the battle that we must face is between light and dark; God and Satan. Don't be discourage if you fall into sin because you have to remember that you are still loved and not matter what you do God will still love you.


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Jeanne E Webster 05/28/09
Yes, you are so right; it's easy to excuse our sins away. BTW, I loved that extra touch on the title, the little candle!

Spruce up your article with paragraphs and edit the typos. (All the better to read, you see!)

Keep up the effort of putting your good thoughts on paper.
Jan Ackerson 05/30/09
A nice little bit of encouragement.

Be careful of run-on sentences and misspellings (truly, for example, instead of truely).

Keep writing and stretching your creativity!
Melinda Wells05/30/09
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this.

I agree that there should have been some breaks between ideas, i.e. paragraphs or spaces.

Keep writing, your ideas are wonderful!
Christelle Botha06/02/09
Paragraphs, spelling and take a breath once and a wile. J But you make a good point, and you have potential. Keep on writing and you will succeed. Well done.
diana kay06/03/09
I like the start . I like the Black and white (no grey) but i didnt like you claiming to be me!! just my personal opinion! The I/you part didnt work but as I say maybe I like things even more separated