The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
A good explanation of the true Light and how this is reflected to the world for all to see.

Editing is needed for paragraph spacing and always double check punctuation and spelling for easier reading.

Keep writing and writing and write some more!
05/28/09
I have to say my favorite part of this entry was your use of "ennobling". Thank you for sharing.
05/29/09
Well-thought out devotional.

It will help your readers if you space your paragraphs. Perhaps you might include an example of how, specifically, Christians can be light in a dark world? Many readers relate better to anecdotal accounts.

Thanks for this entry!
Insightful.

It would have been even better by using a parable to better illustrate your point.

Thanks for sharing it. Keep writing!
06/03/09
It would have been helpful to use paragraphs to split this peice up and make it easier to read.