The Official Writing Challenge
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Great poem! Good word flow. Good imagery. Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
Rose
08/08/05
Very nice poem. Amazing how each of us is drawn in similarily!
Very enjoyable!
08/11/05
A little work with symbolism and language control and you have a great poem.
08/11/05
THIS IS AWESOME! what a gift,GOD has giving you.
Enjoy your blessing.
08/13/05
A very restful poem :)
08/15/05
Nicely written! A great retreat that we can all relate to.