The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/09
The inner longing to be more, better, different is something all of us deal with at some point in our lives, and your devotional deals well with this topic.

You have a nice writing style, and your opening descriptions of the "before and after" women were very true-to-life. I especially appreciated your thoughts about Satan and Eve in the Garden of Eden.

This was very inspirational, and I hope you keep on writing!
A nice contrast between the Garden of Eden and life today. How I liked the was you expessed how Satan tempted Eve with her before and after. A good devotional, you might tighten it up a bit