The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/09
Ashley's thoughts added to the story. All teens think the world is against them. Good job!
You led me down Memory Lane to my teen years; only I wasn't as smart at Ashley. Watch your spelling and typos. Very nice story-loved "hearing" her thoughts.
05/25/09
The story was told from the teens' POV/Voice. I enjoyed it. Well done.

Mona