The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/09
You are correct in that these two events did totally change earth's history--one to our sorrow and one to our joy!
05/25/09
You connected the dots from our expulsion from the garden to Christ's resurrection. A quick synopsis! The detailing is good, but adding quotes and paragraph spacing would make a smoother read. Happy writing!