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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Before and After (05/14/09)

TITLE: Two Events That Changed History
By Brian Haugrud
05/18/09


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Isnít this great Adam? We have this garden all to ourselves. We get to live like we own the place. This is just awesome! Yep--- Adam replied. We have the perfect weather, the greatest location and the most wonderful food. Yep---Adam replied. The only thing we canít have is fruit from that tree in the middle. I wonder why? Letís go look at it and see if we can understand why. You coming Adam? Yep--- Adam replied.
I was talking to that serpent over there and he said it is the best fruit in the whole garden. He said if we ate from this tree, we would be smarter than the rest of the whole world. He told me that God just doesnít want us to be as smart as Him. I donít think thatís fair of God to put it there and tell us not to eat from it. Iím going to just try one bite. MMMMMM! This is GREAT! Do you want to try a bite? Yep---Adam replied.
Adam. Adam! I feel different. Adam, weíre naked!! What is it that has happened to us? I think we should cover ourselves. What do you think, Adam? Yep---Adam replied.
I kind of feel like things would have been a lot different if we wouldnít have eaten that fruit from that tree.
Adam, hide! God is coming and I donít want him to see me like this. I feel like we have done something wrong. Do you think we have Adam? Yep---Adam replied.

AND SO THE COURSE OF HISTORY WAS CHANGED FOREVER!

Joseph, my husband to be. Come here for I have something to tell you. I know I have never been ďwithĒ you but I am pregnant. My God sent His Spirit upon me and I conceived. I am with child. Do you understand what I am trying to tell you? Yep--- Joseph replied.
Joseph, thank you for believing the dream that God sent you last night. Iím so glad that youíre my husband. God told me we should call His name Jesus. Is that OK with you? Yep---Joseph replied.
He grew up so fast. Heís already on His own and has a group of friends who follow Him around. Itís so amazing! Heís able to heal people and cast out demons. I just canít figure out why the leaders all seem to hate Him. Do you think itís because He does so much good, Adam? Yep---Adam replied.
How could this happen? Theyíre going to kill our son. Theyíre going to hang Him from that old cross! I canít bear to watch! Just tell me when itís over. He told our friend John to take care of me. Will you take care of me, John? Yep---John replied.
Itís been over three days since His death and people are saying His body is gone. Who would have taken it? Others have said that they have seen Him raised. Was this Godís plan from the beginning?
My Son, I know that You are the Resurrection and the Life. I believe in You!

AND SO THE COURSE OF HISTORY WAS CHANGED FOREVER!


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Myrna Noyes05/24/09
You are correct in that these two events did totally change earth's history--one to our sorrow and one to our joy!
Jeanne E Webster 05/25/09
You connected the dots from our expulsion from the garden to Christ's resurrection. A quick synopsis! The detailing is good, but adding quotes and paragraph spacing would make a smoother read. Happy writing!