The Official Writing Challenge
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OUCH! What a sad ending. Lol. This would make a great children's story when expanded a teensy bit more. I enjoyed the read, though was sad to see that the Mama would die in the end because of the Wild-tooth-breaker kick. ^_^ A great read. Thanks for sharing this excellent piece!
Your title drew me in and your approach was most creative. Good job.
A clever and imaginative story, particularly good as a children's story. The ending was funny and trgic at the same time. Nicely done!