The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/09
Nice last line! I liked it. fit this piece quite nicely. I did wish for some more story inside of it, but it was still a good read. thanks for sharing this!
05/24/09
Thanks for sharing a most tender experience! All along, your dad was building the foundation for your life. What a legacy!

Some paragraph breaks would spruce up your article and enhance its readability. Keep writing and writing.