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05/21/09
A wonderful reflection. Just think of what a nightmare the reflection could be if she made a different choice.
05/24/09
Her "after" could have been so different- a compassionate health care provider sent by God.
A nice story. The last sentence says it all about her correct decision. A space between paragraphs would show the breaks better. All in all, a very well-written piece. Keep them coming!
Hi,oh this is touching. Nice job. I like the ending and was relieved to see that the doctor informed her so she could make an educated decision. Thank God for after's that end like this one. Keep up your writing. :0)