The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/09
Oh I like this. It's good. I want to know more about this story. It's very interesting! I wanted to know more about these characters and why they were in Egypt. Good twist! I liked the ending best of all though and while your title fits, it doesn't quite hint at all the good story behind it. Good job though. ^_^
05/24/09
Great story and description.