The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/09
Nice story and retelling, though I wished a little more for some suspense here. You had a good setup for it, but you let me (as the reader) in on the secret by giving away it was a stranger and they were on the way to, etc. Otherwise, this was a nice read. Thanks for sharing!
05/24/09
A great topic and good construction of an awesome experience! Blessings and keep up the good work.