The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
A good piece and good story. I could see this expanding into something much more.

Just a tip-writing challenge entries are supposed to be anonymous. Next time, don't add your name at the top-it'll show up later after the judging.

Good job though! I liked the ending best of all. ^_^
05/24/09
You have an eye for detail and a good start on story telling. Very positive read and reflects God at work in all our efforts. Blessings!
05/24/09
This is a beautiful picture of a godly man and woman in a committed marriage! Nice story! :)