The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
A charming little story, with good characters. This would probably make a good children's story.

Just a tip-all challenge entries are supposed to be anonymous, next time, don't put your name at the top. It'll show up later by itself after the judging is done.

^_^ good job!
05/24/09
Quite an imagination! Thank you for an enjoyable read. Is the second chapter ready yet?! Blessings to you and keep writing.