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05/21/09
This reads like a journal entry. Transparent and heart-wrenching at the time to hear the MC speak of all her life's events. Nice touch with how the title hints at what is to come. A few grammatical errors-but nothing to worry about. good job.
I bless and praise God with you for the transforming and resurrection power He has mercifully given you through the cleansing Blood of our Saviour Jesus Christ.

1 Colossians 1:10-11 "That ye might walk worthy of the LORD unto all pleasing, being fruitful in very good work, and in creasing in the knowledge of GOD; Strengthened with all might, according to His glorious power, unto all patience and long suffering with joyfulness;"

God bless you as you completely surrender to Jesus and Him being your ALL in all.

You are so precious to our Father in Heaven.

Peace, grace and mercy to us, through the precious shed Blood of our Saviour Christ Jesus, dear friend.


05/24/09
This is amazing. Gods love is so beautiful and powerful to cleanse us and love us just as we are as we come to Him at the foot of the Cross broken, trying to find that missing part to complete us.