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05/21/09
I love stories that point to the hope we have in Jesus. Even at the end of our rope, Jesus is there waiting with arms open. I thought this was a very good piece. Thank you for sharing it!
05/21/09
Strong opening. Good story. Thanks for sharing.
05/21/09
There was a lot of emotional sorrow and tension in this story, and I was hoping your MC would make the right choice in the end! This sentence was particularly poignant: "His wrists were covered in a bevy of bracelets used only to cover the scars of depression."

I'm glad he found hope for the future!
God bless you for sharing this piece.

I often rejoice with tears whenever I hear of another dying soul saved from the brink of eternal death unto eternal life by responding to the great love and mercies of GOD through the cleansing power of the shed Blood of His Son and our Saviour Jesus Christ.

Thank you for your "missionary" story.

God bless you as you proclaim our Christ Jesus crucified to all.

1 Pet.2:24

05/24/09
Very good description and such strong emotions with the knowing choice he needed to make. Thank you for sharing.
Very good description of the MC's thoughts - depression is complete hopelessness. Very well written. I look forward to seeing more of your writing.