The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
An interesting twist. I was wondering where you were going with this. nice job. This was an interesting read and I was curious to know what she would do.
05/22/09
This story is quite complex, but a morality tale that deserves to be told. There were some confusing details in here that could be clarified but the essence of your story comes through.