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I have many fond memories of chasing "fireflies" as we call them. Lovely poem, though the 3rd verse read a little awkwardly, because I couldn't quite puzzle out why it was a young person and then a mother, until I realized it meant when the MC was younger. This has potential-thanks for sharing! ^_^
this was fun and sweet--great memories here!
Lovely Poem.
How precious are the memories of our children. This was precious and I liked the rhthym. The poem may have read more closer to the title if it had just a little more about fireflies in it. But other than this your poem is wonderful!!Thx for sharing it!:0)))