The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/09
Well, I had to read this about three times to get it. lol. Just because I wanted so desperately to get ot end and see where this was going. GOOD twist! When I finally figured it out, wow. Nice job here-you have a knack for this kind of complicated storytelling. ^_^
05/14/09
Very interesting turn of events. Thank you for sharing it.
05/16/09
good fast story but I got a bit lost with the different characters.