The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/09
Hmm, spec-fic? It kind of reads like it. lol. Interesting twists here and especially leaving it open-ended. I was curious as to why and where this was going and what really happened to Reese. Nice job.
05/16/09
this was quite atmospheric but quite confusing as well.
05/24/09
I sent my critique through a private message. I am still learning the ropes on this site. As a beginner, I see great potential in your writing. I am not a sci-fi person; however, that does not take away from the fact that your writing kept the reviewer interested. The only thing I found to be critical about was that you had a good story going, then all of a sudden, it's over. It's like you didn't quite know how to end the story. You may want to go back and address that one thing. This is merely a suggestion, Bryan. It is your option to take or leave. I look forward to reviewing other work. Laura