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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Good and Bad (05/07/09)

TITLE: good and bad (iv)
By tani sharma
05/14/09


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TOM entered in the house after school while her mom was busy in cooking in kitchen
Tom’’, mom where are you come here, what are you doing I am back.
Kethy tom’s mother came and she kissed and hug her 10 years old son.
Kethy’’, how are you my dear.
Tom’’, Mom I have a question.
Kethy’’, what.
Tom’’,how we deciede what is good and bad in life.
Kethy’’, wow! That is very complex.
Tom’’, why mom.
Kethy’’,because every humen being has his own point of view in life one thing is good for us can be bad for other’s.
Tom’’,but how mom I can’t understand.
Kethy’’,like you don’t like Butter and hate its smell.then you take it as a bad smell but on the other if somebody like butter then he will take its smell as aroma.one thing can be different for person to person.
Kethy’’,if any difficult situation comes in your life, where you are not able to decied what is good or bad then follow your heart because sometime mind confuse us,only those who listen to there heart can decied what is good or bad.
Tom’’,yes mom you are right.now my heart is saying that i need a icecream which is good for me in this hot summer.
Kethy smile’s at her son innocense and she pray to God to bless her son so that he could follow his heart and make diffrence betweengood and bad.


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Sara Harricharan 05/14/09
A good core idea. I could see this becoming something much more. I liked the simple way you wrote this, it could be converted to a children's story with good potential.

Just remember to

add a few spaces

between lines

to make for easier reading and to put each speaker's words in "quotation marks" starting a new line each time the speaker changes, so the reader is never confused as to who is talking when. Thanks for sharing this!