The Official Writing Challenge
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oooh, very creative the way you used that line, "His death does seem both good and bad." You managed to put it first in the first line, then the second/third and fourth, all in four verses and still have it fit together. Great job! I'm impressed.
Thanks Harrichan :)
Just so everyone realizes, the end bit was only added on because the poem in itself did not fulfill the required word count.
Jesus' death on the cross certainly hurts bad, yet brings forth good to all who believe. I like your poem very much because it speaks so deeply within and expresses what Christ's death means to us in our hearts.