The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
Praise God! Glory! This blessed my socks off,WHEW! He's AWESOME!
08/01/05
This was good. I liked the last line of each refrain addressing the sin factor. That was a nice progressive movement that culminated well with a strong provactive prayer.
God Bless and Keep Writing
08/01/05
Really nice poem. Well thought out with a great ending.
08/02/05
Very good entry. Nice flow to the poetry and swing through life from child to maturaty. God bless ya! littlelight
08/04/05
What a wonderful way to show a person is never too old to accept Christ! Good job!
08/04/05
Very nice -liked the progression. One thing I'd rather have seen -that he loved the Lord more than his wife :)
Loved the rhythm - found myself moving in time! Well-thought out. A reminder that as long as we're alive it's never too late. Keep writing!
An engaging poem...very interesting!