The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/09
LOL! I loved your title-but ouch to the food poisoning. Ick. I know how that goes. You did well with this piece, I loved the line with the "Cutest, coziest" it was just perfect for that description.

A tip though-add extra

spaces

between lines to make for easier reading. Good job! ^_^