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05/14/09
This is a great piece! I liked Suzie and how she was able to help Tommy the Terror. I loved the way Suzie explained Jesus to him. It was so simple and easy. You did great with the childlike characterization, however, I felt it wrapped itself up too nicely at the end, lol. It just seemed like too carefully fit together after all the hardships Tommy had talked about. But of course, that's just my opinion. You did well with this-nice job! ^_^
Like Tommy, I believe God still performs miracles!

I am encouraged by the example of Miss Susie on how she pointed the child to the loving, tender, and ever so kind Saviour Jesus into a plain, simple and childlike trust in Him!

Childlike in Susie's expression of the love and goodness of GOD, yet she maintained a reverent fear of our Almighty GOD in her manner at handling the Gospel.

Keep speaking the truth for our crucified and risen Saviour!