The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/09
This reads like a good sermon (or at least the start of one!)

I'm not sure what 'hordorver' is...did you mean 'hors d'oeuvre' (appetizer)? It's a clever title--with the correction.

Good details and examples--a good read.
05/19/09
Interesting thoughts! I chuckled over the hor d'ourvre fork. I like the example of the toddler putting on his shoes. Keep writing.
05/19/09
oops! I spelled hor d'oeuvre wrong too!