The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes. We all are in our waiting line. It held my attention and made me shake my head yes to enter his Kingdom.
08/02/05
Amen, another thing, isn't it wonderful to know that we don't have to wait in line-? Your story was well delivered. God bless ya, littlelight
08/04/05
This was a really enjoyable read :)
Lovely story with a wonderful message. Liked the way you brought in the final thoughts and linked them to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing!