The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/09
I liked this. You did a great job presenting the various views of "good" and "bad."

A few words were capitalized that probably didn't need it, but it didn't detract from the entry.

Great job. Keep writing!
05/19/09
Interesting thoughts! I think you need the word "there" in your title and first line of each stanza.
"Are There Good and Bad Cowboys?"
Keep writing.
05/19/09
This is a very interesting piece, and you have a definite way with words! I especially liked the description of the coins:

"Diametrically opposed yet inseparable, co-existent but irreconcilable,
Twirling, twirling at the flick of a finger,
Decided by fate, chance, statistical probability, natural selection"

Your ending was good, too!
05/21/09
Great job!!! Yea!!! I like it!