The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story with a good lesson. I'd love to be able to experience a little more of the dialog and action in the second half, rather than just being told what happened. Good story.
05/20/09
I liked the start of this right up to where the child fell off the bike then I feel it slid a bit into an account rather than a story.