The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/09
Despite the rest of the story, I had to chuckle at the very end. God works in mysterious ways, doesn't he?

Next time, try putting an extra line between paragraphs. It helps make it "easier on the eyes."

You had the main character's attitude right on... I could feel the tension throughout. Great job.