The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/09
A unique take on the topic for sure!

I'm not sure the verse fit where you had it. It may have fit better at the end as a footnote.

This is a great idea, as I mentioned earlier. I've love to see this rewritten from the point of view of one of the "super heroes." Captain Chocolate, perhaps. :)