The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/09
I enjoyed this prayer and subject matter good. In the first section you use the word "others" quite a few times. Repititon can be useful in a poem to make a point but I think the poem could be improved by using different words that mean the same thing i.e folks friends people etc.
05/19/09
Wow..wonderful thoughts! This should the prayer of all of us. Well done!