The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/09
Good job. I enjoyed this. I was curious how old the children were supposed to be though.
05/15/09
Nice reminder that we cant just read God's word..we have to act on it.
05/15/09
I like the conversation between the girl and Jesus! Good job!
05/16/09
I enjoyed this too but I also was thinking "how old" the childs thinking appears quite mature. It would of helped the story if you could have maybe just mentioned blowing the number of candles on the cake or some other clue as to the age of the "little children"