The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting thoughts...I always liked this story when I was a child. Correcting some minor errors and using spacing between paragraphs would make it easier for the reader.
05/10/09
Very clever to style an entire devotional over how those two words affected two lives.
05/11/09
I like the title, made me want to read your devotion. Be sure to check punctuation before you submit. Good job!