The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/05
Very interesting, detailed and descriptive. I liked the ending "find me". This would be easier to read if the paragraphs were (double) spaced. Quick paced story though. God bless ya, littlelight
08/04/05
I agree with littlelight about making it easier to read physically. Is this a different view of the recent news story? Why is it we feel so little compassion when we watch the news? Have our hearts become hard? Thanks for writing this
08/04/05
Very interesting - a little formatting for an easier read would make it even better. A nice start for a longer story :)