The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this one, it was worth reading. A nice love story. Simple but nice
05/09/09
A bittersweet story, well-written.

I think you were going for a surprise ending, but wouldn't a tee have known her grandfather's name? Maybe you could have gone for irony instead, with the teen questioning grandma about John and elicitng her memories of him, while knowing all along that he was her grandfather.

I remember that song, and it brought back pleasant memories of my own.