The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/09
Very entertaining stream of consciousness.

I only ask that you put an extra space between paragraphs, for your readers' sake.
05/08/09
What a good analogy!
It would help the reader to leave an extra space between paragraphs. I had trouble with that at first, too.
I love your thoughts. Keep writing.
Nice job! Other than the little spaces between each paragraph this piece has wonderful correlations in it.I really like your comparisons! Beautifully done!! Keep on writing. I cna see this in a devotional.