The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. How brave. This is hilarious. I had to laugh as I remembered an incident from yrs ago after reading this. I use to do child care and when I went to change this one little guy's diapers I noticed he had a taste for primary colored pre-school crayons. Thx for the memories.:0)
05/08/09
I don't believe I've ever read a story from this POV before!

05/10/09
Ok, this was gross. I can't believe I finsihed reading it. BUT, the first two sentences and the last two sentences were very good. The in between stuff...was just mush. ;) lol
Very creative, a little gross, and yes, humorous. Good job, I stink...uhm, I think.
Oh.....My......Gosh!