The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/09
Very good devotional, and good use of the topic words.

You can inject a spark into your devotionals by adding a personal story or anecdote. Readers will relate to those.

This is well-organized and well-written.
05/14/09
Interesting thoughts!
this is a good devotional, but a short example, an incident, would emphasize it more. Keep writing.