The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/09
An intriguing snippet about George.

I'd encourage you to use the full allotment of words, and to tell some anecdotes about George so that we get to know him better. Watch out for run-on sentences.

He's an interesting fellow--thanks for this little teaser.
05/14/09
This sounds like it could be made into a very interesting story. I would like to see you use more of your 750 word limit. Keep writing.