The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/09
It's certainly difficult to fly the coop--both from the parents' point of view, and the young person's.

I found some of your sentences and word choices a little bit stilted, and I'm not clear on how this fits the topic.

Love your title, and the way your presented this girl's dilemma--very thoughtful.

Deut. 28:6 A blessing will be on your coming in and on your going out." Psalm 121:8(BBE)

Indeed, the father was wise to counsel his young daughter, "The Lord knows the coming in and going out in our lives; to pray and seek the Lord's mind; with His help, to understand and respond to His will."

Thank you.
11/10/09
Hi, Mom, it's sweet how you took my life story and wrote it out. God is truly gracious, and I'm eager to see how He will continue to lead me....