The Official Writing Challenge
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It's certainly difficult to fly the coop--both from the parents' point of view, and the young person's.

I found some of your sentences and word choices a little bit stilted, and I'm not clear on how this fits the topic.

Love your title, and the way your presented this girl's dilemma--very thoughtful.

Deut. 28:6 A blessing will be on your coming in and on your going out." Psalm 121:8(BBE)

Indeed, the father was wise to counsel his young daughter, "The Lord knows the coming in and going out in our lives; to pray and seek the Lord's mind; with His help, to understand and respond to His will."

Thank you.
Hi, Mom, it's sweet how you took my life story and wrote it out. God is truly gracious, and I'm eager to see how He will continue to lead me....