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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: In and Out (04/30/09)

TITLE: Breathe! (i)
By Stacy Wells
05/03/09


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My chest is pounding
My side is throbbing
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

Left, right, left, right
Donít quit keep going
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

I can do this
One more mile
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

I want to quit
I need to stop
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

Itís a marathon I know
I wish it were easier
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

Why must I do this all alone
No one to help me
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

If only there was someone to give me a lift
Someone to provide the strength I cannot find
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

I can see the end
My crown to come
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

I do it because I must
I do it because Iím called
In, out, in, out
Breathe!

This isnít about a race you know
Itís about life, life in Christ
In, out, in, out
Breathe!


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Jan Ackerson 05/10/09
Wonderful metaphor!
Nikki Rosen05/10/09
simple but well said. Sarah