The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/09
Cute story! I like how in or out was not decided till the end of it. Great job!
05/09/09
very cute--I like that he persuaded the 5 boys by convincing them that basketball really was the better choice--not by being mean--would like more stories about him!
05/10/09
Very captivating!
05/11/09
Cute and believeable-I like the comparison of her son to Moses and the quick prayer at the end. I hope she had lemons or her strong willed son may try to convince someone else to come up with refreshments, because they used his basketball hoop.:0) I love stories with children in it and this was well written.