The Official Writing Challenge
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So realistic as so many are having to do this very thing, be uprooted. But where there is God there is hope. Praise the Lord. He works everything out for those who love the Lord.:0) I relaly like this piece! God bless!
05/10/09
I've noticed that you've used these same characters in previous stories (the name is memorable, as it's very similar to mine). You might want to give your characters different names, to maintain the anonymity of the Challenge.

Keep writing--it's great to be persistent! I've enjoyed reading these.