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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: In and Out (04/30/09)

TITLE: Mr. President
By Eric Herrmann
04/30/09


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That day was a new Experience for me The First African American to be President was flying over are head it was exciting everyone was out of there cages and into the streets of Arnold Mo. It was a different moment for me as he was .here for the 4 hours. Planes Helicopters Huge Aircrafts all kinds of different cop’s protesters Yelling at each other nobody could agree to disagree…..I feel sorry for The Man Cause You can never please them all. The Aircrafts Were so close it rattled the whole mobile home. It was awesome. There were People everywhere and I t so neat to see there at least is a chance for anyone who believes in something to never stop trying. To never give in no matter what the whole world could not see. If it is in your heart you can do it. So that is what I got out of it no Caius. Straight peace. I wish the whole world could have the same Outlook. In and out.


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Jeanne E Webster 05/08/09
What an exciting experience you had there in Arnold, Mo.! Some day you'll be telling your grandchildren all about this wonderful event.

Proofread your spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure more closely to spot errors. Keep writing, as you have an eye for details.

Your sensitivity to the inner spirit in people is most evident.

Jan Ackerson 05/10/09
It definitely is an exciting time for our country!
diana kay05/14/09
i enjoyed this very descriptive!